tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7630295318214379308.post7733820431262981168..comments2024-03-18T07:39:38.851-04:00Comments on Speak of the Devil: A Character In Search Of A StoryWilliam Kendallhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00331324250821836822noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7630295318214379308.post-61941121850273400552013-09-29T12:48:19.773-04:002013-09-29T12:48:19.773-04:00It's captivating William. You had me all the w...It's captivating William. You had me all the way. I hope the character finds his story.CMSmithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13623922567796370246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7630295318214379308.post-44845096869559451282013-09-28T18:52:16.059-04:002013-09-28T18:52:16.059-04:00Wow, William. I don't think I've ever seen...Wow, William. I don't think I've ever seen any of your actual prose. :) Nicely done! Great capture of a scene filled with tension. This character (or characters, really) still looking for a story? Any prospective home yet?Devonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02838547497014663574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7630295318214379308.post-75016110106273459122013-09-27T10:59:14.515-04:002013-09-27T10:59:14.515-04:00Wonderful scene! The beginning of a great novel:)....Wonderful scene! The beginning of a great novel:).Maria McKenziehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15138614172014005449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7630295318214379308.post-83430333829184134502013-09-26T22:14:17.584-04:002013-09-26T22:14:17.584-04:00Nice job, William! Very tense. Already seems like ...Nice job, William! Very tense. Already seems like the characters are real. Hope you continue with it. :)PK HREZOhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11650153097981426833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7630295318214379308.post-44297482463688363212013-09-26T20:12:58.087-04:002013-09-26T20:12:58.087-04:00Nice and very realistic. Reminded me of some tough...Nice and very realistic. Reminded me of some tough times I had earlier this year. Great descriptions of feelings, which of course I love. Intangible Heartshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05047040538015079182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7630295318214379308.post-45683840534096047162013-09-26T10:46:48.889-04:002013-09-26T10:46:48.889-04:00I too have a handful of characters in search of st...I too have a handful of characters in search of stories. They stay in my head, but I haven't found anything for them. <br /><br />This character of yours has a lot of baggage and would make a great protagonist with an interesting back story such as this one.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7630295318214379308.post-61912175420203539962013-09-26T10:35:54.390-04:002013-09-26T10:35:54.390-04:00@Kelly: it'll come to me.
@Mari: thanks!
@Me...@Kelly: it'll come to me.<br /><br />@Mari: thanks!<br /><br />@Meradeth: it's a start; their voices feel clear to me.<br /><br />@Norma: that would work!<br /><br />@Mark: very much so!<br /><br />@Shelly: thank you!William Kendallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00331324250821836822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7630295318214379308.post-26026699704001542252013-09-26T10:30:31.551-04:002013-09-26T10:30:31.551-04:00This is good. Loved it!This is good. Loved it!shellyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09596621767297173021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7630295318214379308.post-9651943905752430522013-09-26T02:34:43.386-04:002013-09-26T02:34:43.386-04:00Talk about a tense conversation!Talk about a tense conversation!Mark R Hunterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07685591390353442531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7630295318214379308.post-79028378758841783252013-09-25T22:25:07.167-04:002013-09-25T22:25:07.167-04:00I think this would work very well in one of our jo...I think this would work very well in one of our joint projects, partner--I thought so when you first showed it to me.<br /><br />But I can also see it fitting into your solo work--maybe a colleague of Stryker's?Normahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12685538277690762655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7630295318214379308.post-46474092612682119242013-09-25T21:37:05.607-04:002013-09-25T21:37:05.607-04:00Oh wow, great scene. Wonderful voice, and definite...Oh wow, great scene. Wonderful voice, and definitely tons of tension. I hope you find something to do with this--it definitely makes me want more!Meradeth Houstonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06741790047121063893noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7630295318214379308.post-59227040765271695472013-09-25T20:07:18.079-04:002013-09-25T20:07:18.079-04:00It's either the start of a good novel or the e...It's either the start of a good novel or the end. I did go over to Norma's Review, but couldn't post there. <br />Mari Collierhttp://www.maricollier.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7630295318214379308.post-60781445761369636372013-09-25T20:02:23.131-04:002013-09-25T20:02:23.131-04:00This is a great scene, William. I hope you figure ...This is a great scene, William. I hope you figure out what you want to do with it.Kelly Hashwayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13936313159809041986noreply@blogger.com